Even though it's the same picture from frame to frame, it somehow evokes a continually changing body language as it goes. I sense a coldness in the lady in the last panel, and an uncomfortableness in the man. It was sort of intentional, but mostly accidental.I might do more Mr. Smooth comics in the future. I can use this same image and just change the text. I didn't give it a title yet, because I'm still working on one. Mr. Smooth is ehh. Maybe Mr. Buttertongue, or Mr. Sugartongue would be funnier.
Hope everyone has a happy Christmas.
hilarious, sounds like my wife and i's pillow talk...
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ReplyDeleteMinimal execution, maximum laughs -
your color choices make this one of your most ...dare I say...beautiful comics you've made.
Great writing underscores the differences between men and women hilariously!
I could see this as a greeting card, the image is the front, inside blank (who cares?), in the romantic humor section, if there is one...there should be.
Funny stuff!
I can only hope that one day I can be as smooth with the ladies as Mr. Smooth! Merry Christmas, Keith!
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ReplyDeleteThanks, ha ha! me too!
Apocolyte,
Thanks! Minimal work is my favorite!
Matt,
Merry Christmas to you, and Happy New Year
Thanks!
Mr. Smooth works for me....the name and the cartoon.
ReplyDeleteLove the pallette.
Happy New Year!!!
Thanks Willy, and Happy New Year to you too, sir!
ReplyDeletehahaha! i think i can hear the crickets chirppin' love your comics!
ReplyDeleteha ha! thanks!
ReplyDeleteMr. Smooth is a good name...but also Buttertongue. They're both good. It's got such a contrast which is why I love it... soft, pastel-like Victorianism... and the word "poop." Great sucker punch humor. More please.
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Ha Ha! I like the phrase "sucker-punch humor."
ReplyDeleteThanks!