Wednesday, January 5, 2011

SPIKE THE SELF-CONSCIOUS #2

Here is the second Spike the Self-Conscious comic. You can see the 1st one by clicking HERE.

This was the original version. It seemed like it kept needlessly going after the joke was already over. I'd be interested in what other people think. If you have a long horn on your head you don't need to comment. I already know how you feel about all of this.

4 comments:

  1. yup i agree completely. it doesn't need to go on after the "what! why?". the timing is perfect and funny in the "revised" version.

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  2. Brad
    Thanks for the confirmation. Sometimes I look at a couple versions and I honestly can't decide which one to go with.

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  3. I agree the shorter version works fine. Great stuff, Keith!

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