This was the original version. It seemed like it kept needlessly going after the joke was already over. I'd be interested in what other people think. If you have a long horn on your head you don't need to comment. I already know how you feel about all of this.
yup i agree completely. it doesn't need to go on after the "what! why?". the timing is perfect and funny in the "revised" version.
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ReplyDeleteThanks for the confirmation. Sometimes I look at a couple versions and I honestly can't decide which one to go with.
I agree the shorter version works fine. Great stuff, Keith!
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